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Hopefully the filters will come when Koen's new business is on tracks.
The story looks like it's aiming for a point, but somehow misses it, and I'm not sure why right now.
That's Koen's style: he makes you think he's wanting to prove a point, but he's not.
Nice story!~
2nd panel: We're going to hand them their own skidplates!
Last panel: I'll become slow night news myself
Hope my feedback is ok.
I fixed panels 1-2.
I'm not sure about the last panel: the present tense is supposed to point out what just happened, and I saw it in many comics... but I'll look deeper into this. Thank you again