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Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck
THE TRANSFORMERS: UNKNOWN SOLDIERS
EPISODE 5


Story and art by Koen Luyten :iconkluyten:
Lettering and edits by Franco Villa :iconm3gr1ml0ck:

Presented by:

the TransComics Group :icontranscomics:

Transformers: Seeds Of Deception :icontf-seedsofdeception:

Transformers: The Lost Seasons :icontf-the-lost-seasons:


NOTES

Creator Koen will soon take commissions. Check out his page! :iconkluyten:

The name of the weapon is supposed to be a nod to Full Metal Jacked.

Unknown Soldiers gallery.

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Seibertron, IDW Forum, Tformers, AllSpark, Tfw2005, TfArchive, TheTF, FullMetalHero, Cybertron, TransFans, TMUK, TfCog, TfShadowCon, NTFA.
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TF-The-Lost-Seasons Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Great story, I'd have added some fx to show better that the different panels were recordings, maybe some color filter, date numbers or graphics similar to the "LIVE".
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Added the graphics!
Hopefully the filters will come when Koen's new business is on tracks.
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TF-The-Lost-Seasons Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Looking better already!
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Blueshift2k5 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
I like the general idea, but some of the sentence construction is a bit clunky.

The story looks like it's aiming for a point, but somehow misses it, and I'm not sure why right now.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
I edited two panels, thanks to another fan.

That's Koen's style: he makes you think he's wanting to prove a point, but he's not.
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LittleMissAwesome Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student
Death penalty for helping a wounded Decepticon? Yeesh.:noes:

Nice story!~
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Evil perverted fanatic Autobot spliter faction!!
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LittleMissAwesome Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student
:la:
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Jadeedoll Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
1st panel: If we have to become.... (we've doesn't work in this instance)
2nd panel: We're going to hand them their own skidplates!
Last panel: I'll become slow night news myself
Hope my feedback is ok.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Thanks!
I fixed panels 1-2.
I'm not sure about the last panel: the present tense is supposed to point out what just happened, and I saw it in many comics... but I'll look deeper into this. Thank you again :)
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