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Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck
THE TRANSFORMERS: UNKNOWN SOLDIERS
EPISODE 5


Story and art by Koen Luyten :iconkluyten:
Lettering and edits by Franco Villa :iconm3gr1ml0ck:

Presented by:

the TransComics Group :icontranscomics:

Transformers: Seeds Of Deception :icontf-seedsofdeception:

Transformers: The Lost Seasons :icontf-the-lost-seasons:


NOTES

Creator Koen will soon take commissions. Check out his page! :iconkluyten:

The name of the weapon is supposed to be a nod to Full Metal Jacked.

Unknown Soldiers gallery.

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TF-The-Lost-Seasons Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Great story, I'd have added some fx to show better that the different panels were recordings, maybe some color filter, date numbers or graphics similar to the "LIVE".
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Added the graphics!
Hopefully the filters will come when Koen's new business is on tracks.
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TF-The-Lost-Seasons Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Looking better already!
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Blueshift2k5 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
I like the general idea, but some of the sentence construction is a bit clunky.

The story looks like it's aiming for a point, but somehow misses it, and I'm not sure why right now.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
I edited two panels, thanks to another fan.

That's Koen's style: he makes you think he's wanting to prove a point, but he's not.
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LittleMissAwesome Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student
Death penalty for helping a wounded Decepticon? Yeesh.:noes:

Nice story!~
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Evil perverted fanatic Autobot spliter faction!!
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LittleMissAwesome Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student
:la:
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Jadeedoll Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
1st panel: If we have to become.... (we've doesn't work in this instance)
2nd panel: We're going to hand them their own skidplates!
Last panel: I'll become slow night news myself
Hope my feedback is ok.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Thanks!
I fixed panels 1-2.
I'm not sure about the last panel: the present tense is supposed to point out what just happened, and I saw it in many comics... but I'll look deeper into this. Thank you again :)
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Jadeedoll Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Nice art, but the English dialogue is poorly done, and because of that, I cannot quite follow the story on the page.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Please point out what's wrong: I can fix that.
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multi-comics Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
aargh, they made my idea... :D awesome,
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
XD
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Lemniskate Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Is Newsanchortrons... hairplate parted?
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
So it seems >_<
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F-for-feasant-design Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Loving Newsanchortron!
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Clu-art Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't agree with the content of the first panel. I don't think Autobots would do this.
I mean even we humans have rules how to treat wounded. And to help them is a general rule by the Geneva Convention I.

But art is good.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
It's the kind of Autobots described by IDW since Megatron: Origin.
You get to see such fanatics in LSotW and other stuff by Roberts :(
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multi-comics Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
but but, it's good, IDW is doing great, it's been a 6 milion or something year war, there can't be pure evil and good in it, it's a reality of any war, crazy stuff happens in good guy's side too. they are all guilty to a point.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Not like that: what's the point of being Autobot, if you act exactly like Decepticons and hold on to no ideals at all?
Just join them and put and end to the war, if there are no differences at all.
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multi-comics Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
the execution camps is toofar, but in war crazy people join the ranks aswell, they might be great warriors but behavioural they might be damaged or something. i don't think IDW has gone too far, they are making it a bit more realistic, just like when fortmax killed those 2! or idk, magnus, he's kind of a fanatic, a few more steps and he'll act like one, just like prowl.
sometimes sticking too much to an ideal makes trouble. (unless at the end of the day prowl turns out to be right and ruin all my yaapings... XD)
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Clu-art Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, of course. But here it looks like this would be promoted and wanted by officials. I can see why you did it. But I don't like it too much.
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Oh, ok: but you should see Unknown Soldiers as a generic, "non aligned" universe, where everything can happen.
Any continuity can be referenced, as this belongs to none: hence, the OCs.
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Clu-art Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hm, but then it's not neccessary to divide Autobots from Decepticons; ok there might be (there are for sure) also not so good Autobots (which is totally clear). But killing wounded POW with orders or at least toleration from the higher ranks? (That was my first impression of that panel at least.)
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M3Gr1ml0ck Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Probably they are not as firmly controlled as you might think.
Maybe the executioners are a splinter faction, which enforces their own rules.
Those being executed are the Real Autobots.
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Clu-art Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's open for interpretation. Maybe a bit too open. But that's not sooo important. ;)
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