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Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck Transformers - Unknown Soldiers 5 by M3Gr1ml0ck
THE TRANSFORMERS: UNKNOWN SOLDIERS
EPISODE 5


Story and art by Koen Luyten :iconkluyten:
Lettering and edits by Franco Villa :iconm3gr1ml0ck:

Presented by:

the TransComics Group :icontranscomics:

Transformers: Seeds Of Deception :icontf-seedsofdeception:

Transformers: The Lost Seasons :icontf-the-lost-seasons:


NOTES

Creator Koen will soon take commissions. Check out his page! :iconkluyten:

The name of the weapon is supposed to be a nod to Full Metal Jacked.

Unknown Soldiers gallery.

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Seibertron, IDW Forum, Tformers, AllSpark, Tfw2005, TfArchive, TheTF, FullMetalHero, Cybertron, TransFans, TMUK, TfCog, TfShadowCon, NTFA.
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:icontf-the-lost-seasons:
Great story, I'd have added some fx to show better that the different panels were recordings, maybe some color filter, date numbers or graphics similar to the "LIVE".
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
Added the graphics!
Hopefully the filters will come when Koen's new business is on tracks.
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:icontf-the-lost-seasons:
Looking better already!
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:iconblueshift2k5:
I like the general idea, but some of the sentence construction is a bit clunky.

The story looks like it's aiming for a point, but somehow misses it, and I'm not sure why right now.
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
I edited two panels, thanks to another fan.

That's Koen's style: he makes you think he's wanting to prove a point, but he's not.
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:iconlittlemissawesome:
Death penalty for helping a wounded Decepticon? Yeesh.:noes:

Nice story!~
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
Evil perverted fanatic Autobot spliter faction!!
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:iconjadeedoll:
1st panel: If we have to become.... (we've doesn't work in this instance)
2nd panel: We're going to hand them their own skidplates!
Last panel: I'll become slow night news myself
Hope my feedback is ok.
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:iconm3gr1ml0ck:
Thanks!
I fixed panels 1-2.
I'm not sure about the last panel: the present tense is supposed to point out what just happened, and I saw it in many comics... but I'll look deeper into this. Thank you again :)
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